Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live in the public spotlight. They have no right to complain when they feel the media are intruding on their privacy.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In each career of art or sport there are some public figures that grab the attention of content makers in social media platforms, TV channels, or newspapers. Many of these famous people are unsatisfied with the excessive reporting in media about their personal life. Whether they are eligible to accept or to refuse this fact, it is a moot point. I believe that each person, regardless of his/her fame, has a range of privacy which should be respected. The following essay will display both sides of this fact.
On one hand, many reporters and journalists are of the belief that any piece of information about any individual could be published anywhere at any time. In other words, it is agreed among them that the more news about the private life of celebrities are published, the more excitement would be gained in their reports. For instance, It is observed that the social media pages which are concerned with gossips or scandals of the well-known people have much more followers than the other pages. As long as this kind of reports is popular among many readers and viewers, the media industry will continue to produce such materials.
On the other hand, it is believed that the violation of an individual’s confidentiality is unacceptable. This means that each person should have his/her own moments that are not shared with others. The painful accident that happened to Princess Diana in 1996 was clear evidence of how is it harmful to violate the others’ privacy. Furthermore, these persons who chase celebrities to take a photo or write a piece of breaking news may expose themselves to legal liabilities in their countries.
In conclusion, the definition of privacy may be different between the two points of view. In my opinion, the right to privacy should be highly considered. However, governmental authorities have to impose laws and regulations that oblige everyone to respect others’ personal life. The exposure of celebrities’ personal life on media will not be decreased unless people's awareness about the case would be enhanced and supported by strict acts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87174562163 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576811594203 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4538861186 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.176470588 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151839657274 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471097573755 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338840326145 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905719472412 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224834582744 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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