Do you agree or disagree? It is impossible to always be completely honest with your friends.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of being honest in any relationships. Many people deem that being honest means being ideal person, while others have a conviction that sometimes honesty destroys relationships. it is my firm belief that friendship sometimes need negative qualities for a number of reasons and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, nobody could overlook this fact friendship requires attention, hence, to build great relationship both friends have to invest attention. furthermore , sometimes you should change your priorities, which hold you on the right way. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. About five years ago, when I was studying at sixth grade I have my two best friends, we were really closed to each other. one day, these two of my friends argue with each other, and this situation was hard for me, since I ought to play with two of them. Eventually, I decided to solve this problem. I went to buy gifts for them and put notes on it, where I wrote that they were from argued friend. As a result, they forgive each other. if I have never lied , my friends never forgive each other.
Another equally vital reason that should be highlighted here is private aims. As the world becomes increasingly civilized , there is a competition between people who want to successful not only in personal life, also in career. so, this fact let me think that each human being has his or her own targets that are too private. In this kind of situations soul mates moves to second place. Drawing from my own personal experience, I can surely say that when you have your own purpose , you have to do it without any announcement. As all of us know, actions speak louder than words, so people should achieve their aim and then tell it to their friends, because in this situation they can be reason to repel from your purpose.
Last but not least; motivation plays vital role to achieve some goals. if one of your relatives or friends will give opposite advice to you then you can regret. For instance, this year I want to apply for top university of America, however advice of my friends deactivate me to finish my work. As a result, now I am a bit nervous that I did not apply , however it was great chance.
In light of all aforementioned reasons, it is explicitly obvious that honesty is not one of the most essential quality, since it can honesty sometimes can hurt and can deactivate you to aim your purpose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, really, second, so, then, while, for instance, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68957871397 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57388511396 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549889135255 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2225961348 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9565217391 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6086956522 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73913043478 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153840429895 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413993806269 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480432743956 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841918552652 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028434272692 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.