Some people think that studying history is a waste of time while others think it is essential to learn history. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
it is apparent that history has always been of paramount importance to the development of society. However, there has been heated debate whether it is necessary to learn history. Whereas some suppose that it is useless and time-consuming, other people believe history needs studying. This essay will outline the two different views.
On one hand, learning history is a waste of time. First and foremost, it requires fellow human beings to remember clearly historical documents as well as milestones, which are not exhilarating at all. Students at school have to learn by heart all the important events otherwise they will not attain good grades when taking exams. Listening to tedious lecture makes them feel unexcited, which makes it impossible for them to accumulate any knowledge. Moreover, history has nothing to do with the real life. generally speaking, it is just a chain of events occurring in the past, which is irrelevant to today's society. Rather than focus on history, perhaps mankind should care more about science and technology, a key point in the modern world the 4.0 technology era.
On the other hand, history plays a prominent role for the time being. Coupled with culture and tradition, it enables people to understand how their countries have evolved towards better communities. Thanks to history, we have chance to be given an insight into what our ancestors and forefathers suffered, how much they sacrificed to the evolution of a nation. that is why today generations have to hold them in high regards and treasure what we have. Another reason for learning history could be the outcomes that it brings about. An awful lot of inventions in the past have changed people's lives considerably. take, telephones invented by Alexander Graham Bell or Televisions by John Logie Baird, for example, are a big improvement on making the world better than ever before. Needless to say, without learning history, human beings cannot discover those useful machines.
In conclusion, despite the fact that history is worthless according to some people, I hold the belief that history remains to be an embedded part of all time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13467048711 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68918158649 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63323782235 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0248565156 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.45 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166571193289 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544095729979 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620493493974 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110390872296 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311966259163 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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