Some people prefer to be self employed, whereas others like working for companies or institutions. Which is a better approach.
Certain individual are more interested in opening their own business, however other enjoy to work for organisations. This essay will firstly discuss the amount of freedom enjoyed by businessman and secondly, this essay will discuss the financial rewards gained and enjoyed by business person
a person working for ones own business will enjoy complete independence and freedom . They will have the right to take their own decisions without consulting others. Moreover, business person have full control on each and every activity of the business such as the quantities of goods to be purchase and the cash inflow and outflow. Additionally, businessman decide the working days and time as per their own convenience. They can even take a day or two off without consulting or taking permission from others.
Furthermore, once a business is operational and if it earns huge amount of profits, after paying all the salaries and making essential payments the remaining amount is enjoyed by the owner itself. Although, the owner has to take huge risk and uncertainties in the beginning but the profits and benefits which are earned at the later stage is enjoyed by the owner.To support this there is justifiable verbalization that higher the risk is greater will be the profits. To elucidate, according to the recent studies people who take risk and losses at the beginning of a new business are the ones who are the most successful and profitable at the later stages.
To conclude, i vehemently agree that people should be motivated to start their own companies and to work for themselves as they will have the right to take the decision and will not have to approach anyone for permission, moreover, profits earned at the later stage all belongs to the owners of the company
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04761904762 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74508466204 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513605442177 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.9427640763 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.4 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118187974559 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474456886216 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547917182861 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831266326354 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574224335624 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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