Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
communication is the most important aspect of human life. we communicate to share thoughts, ideas, believes, problems, queries and many more. These help us in businesses, trades, building communities, networks and so on. Without communication, the world would stop functioning and would engulf with utter chaos. some people believe that there should be a sense of awareness that what and how much information we are sharing while some believe that there should not be any restrictions. This essay will talk about both views.
it has been said that the only way to protect information is by sharing it. knowledge grows when we pass it to someone else. In today's world, profound developments have been done in various fields such as research, innovation, medical, engineering, and many more. scientists are finding answers to the world's many mysteries, a lot of innovations have been done every day, medical field is striving to search a cure for deadly diseases and various vaccines and medicines have been manufactured. I believe that it is extremely vital to pass the knowledge and information generated from all the above and many more as it would help to make the world a better place. An experiment might fail but the data produced from an experiment would help scientists to make other discoveries. people might get inspired by the innovation to discover something better that would benefit society. In my view, we should communicate the information that would help people in solving problems and elevating their lives in one or the other way.
On the other hand, it is not wise to share sensitive information that would invite problems. For example, banks recommend people to not share credentials with anyone. we all know that the discovery of the atom bomb has brought the world to destruction. Terror activities are increasing because the knowledge of creating explosives is freely available on the internet. some information is meant to keep secret. many countries have completed space missions and the data collected has been shared with the world but it is not in favor of the countries to share the internal information to stay ahead of each other.
In conclusion, Imparting knowledge is significant in modern society. Although in some situations we should maintain the secrecy of the information taking into consideration the impact on the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15844155844 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86221038207 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.3809454995 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2727272727 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289347804286 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770687414687 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770034775145 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179988952474 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669575286537 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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