ou stayed at your friend’s house when you attended a conference in Australia. Unfortunately, you left a large envelope with some important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter:
thank your friend for the stay
describe where you left the envelope
ask him/her to return it to you by post
Begin your letter as follows: Dear _________
You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear John,
I’d like to thank you for allowing me to stay in your apartment and for your great hospitality. The australian beer we drank together was out of this world. I really enjoyed my stay with you and your family. However, I left some very important contractual papers in the room I slept.
Those are the contractual papers of one of our top customers in Australia. I was working on those papers late night before my return flight. I was very tired, so I put them in the top drawer next to the bed. I thought I would take them before I leave the house for the airport. However, I totally forgot. Can you believe it?
Those papers are very valuable to me and to my company, so can you please return them to me by post? I’d be really greatful to you. I’ll also transfer the expense you occur in your bank account. My full address is mentinoed below in this letter.
Hoping to catch you soon! Give my love to your baby girl.
Your Friend,
Jay
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- ou stayed at your friend s house when you attended a conference in Australia Unfortunately you left a large envelope with some important documents in your room Write a letter to your friend In the letter thank your friend for the stay describe where you l
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...them in the top drawer next to the bed. I thought I would take them before I leav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42458100559 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28046581386 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586592178771 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5195237759 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.5 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.1875 16.8248392259 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5625 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344910565326 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112865921084 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114989146358 0.0603063233224 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190511812864 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112592492368 0.0580467560999 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 8.37731958763 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.17 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.39 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.