Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both of these two views and give your own opinion.
Since the first human society, many problems faced its being safe and comfortable such as crimes, natural disaster and health care to name a few. Among these dilemmas, crimes have been playing the most baffling role in human minds. some people tend to crack down on people who commit it through imprisoning, isolating or even executing them. While others advocate a more rational approach towards criminal through giving them the opportunity to change their status quo. In this essay I will examine both views and set them forth as straight-forward as I can.
first of all, people who incline to crack down on criminals follow the convenient procedure in dealing with criminals based on some facts and evidences. Firstly, this way is the most practical way to cope with criminals according to what history had mentioned. Further, this way still occupy the first position on any country's constitution, as the latest census had pointed out.
Despite the whole argument above, there are those who hold the sophisticated procedure to dealing with criminals. they assured that the overwhelming majority of phsychiatric scholars indicate that governments should undergo a comprehensive metamorphosis in coping with the criminals by giving them a chance to take more acquaintances and more pragmatic approaches to management their personal problems. Moreover, in the current era we should consider the criminal's problem with an expert eye,for they are ultimately a humans like us but circumstances compel them to do what they carry out.
taking all arguments and evidences I have touched on in account, the arguments concerning this theme tend to resolve itself over the long term. When people become more intellectual in dealing with global problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, moreover, so, still, while, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32374100719 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84130768244 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643884892086 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9287278944 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.846153846 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105793361342 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033948845958 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321503854325 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574287655965 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025950628838 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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