Personal Development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
technological invention at such a rapid pace started interfering with people’s social lives. Many believes that technologies such as mobile phones are the reason for people being less comminicate socially. this essay will discuss that modern day technologies are keeps people attached to it making them less involve with public.
modern day innovative technologies need to be handled with care so that it does not remove your existence socially. people need to understand that social interaction is the perfect way of being happy. they should use mobile for specific period of time and for specific purpose. it should not start to indulge in your personal lives. For example, modern day kids become so engulf in technologies such as mobile phone, ipads etc that they hardly interact with anyone. this affect them psychologically and they do not understand how to live with the people. I feel technologies cannot affect your social communication if handled maturely.
Since technology has reached the pinnacle of being user friendly and smartest, humans get mesmerized with such advanced feature and spent most of the time among such high end devices. mobile phones, tablets, VR games has become so advanced and lively such that everyone irrespective of age groups gets attracted to such machineries. According to report, it is found that people who are very active in social networking groups are found less interactive with real humans. To sum up, technologies such as mobiles are preventing humans to become more social and this keeps on increasing.
this essay argued that todays technologies are the reason why people are becoming more socially inactive while this can be prevented if they use wisely such devices. I strongly agree that presently, humans do not interact with one other and spends most of their time with high tech technologies.
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- Some people argue that technological inventions such as mobile phones are making people socially less interactive Do you agree or disagree 67
- Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned while others think people should be free to choose Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Personal Development is the base for professional development and advancing in one s career To what extent do you agree or disagree 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example, i feel, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24161073826 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7330437976 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543624161074 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3897439343 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0563922461465 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0231430684706 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279399576348 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0390828685078 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191850404381 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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