The growth of online shopping will one day lead to the closing of all shops in town and cities. Do you agree or disagree
The technologies revolution has affect all sectors, including shopping World, opening conversation and ways about the probability of increasing the online shopping in towns and cities, which I agree with the possibility of seeing much online shops around us.
The reason of increasing the number of the online shop, because of the benefits that are provided either to consumers and retail store, for example the retail store will take advantages of not paying rent for local or store to display the items, also not required much manpower, and any other direct charge Like Tax, electricity, Water. Encouraging them to earn more and without following in failer Case, but they will miss the direct contact with clients for convincing and negotiating.
As far for the consumers have many advantages too, the prices of products it’s cleared for all by using of searching services to compared with all other sealer prices, and for choosing items no more difficulty are presented, like moving to stores that are located in deferent and far area, as all pictures and video are online with all technical suspect needed, missing the feel with goods before buying it, whoever the e-commerce websites provided door to door delivery but in some situation lost the credibility of delivering time, with counting return policies not respectable from the sealer.
In conclusion, online shopping has given the opportunity of finding products and owing them to the user in comfortable level, changing the idea of early consumer shopping method, the number of online shopping and serviced are increased with the development and changing of life style.
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- Nowadays some buildings such as offices and schools have open space design instead of separate rooms Why is it so Do you think this is a positive or negative development 61
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema Discuss both views and give your own opinion 57
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'technologies'' or 'technology's'?
Suggestion: technologies'; technology's
The technologies revolution has affect all sectors, incl...
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Line 5, column 514, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t in some situation lost the credibility of delivering time, with counting return...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25475285171 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62795688371 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593155893536 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.660415608 49.4020404114 303% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 276.4 106.682146367 259% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.6 20.7667163134 253% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213219068025 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126081731577 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927584698129 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150593444781 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881616277416 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.6 13.0946893788 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.7 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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