The growth of online shopping will one day lead to the closing of all shops in town and cities. Do you agree or disagree
The technology revolution has huge impact, on the development of online shopping against retail shop, Spur the latter to diminuent compared with before, in this essay i will discuss the advantages and drawback of online shopping compared with retail store.
In one hand the online shopping has advantages from many angles, firstly searching service that help consumer to see all models/series ,and compare prices from many online web, for example I used to purchase Cellphone accessories from online shop at cheaper price , secondly shopping timing at comfortable time night or early Morning, and wherever you are either at home in train,…, in addition to this the online shopping allowed you see all comments from consumer that use products, before you process the purchasing, and also ability to buy goods from any country you would like, for instance delivery terms of online shopping has possibility option door to door at short time, the only things that need to be clarified ,before starting the deal is the check the credibility of the shop ,and returning process to avoid any complication later.
On the other hand retail shop has obsession consumer ,which the preferred the direct contact with sealer ,and checking and test products before purchase it, considering the possibility to take it as you pay for it, some store the change dispatch and delivered products to any place you want
In overall the online shopping is opportunity and good income for many users and consumer , while the store retail full in direct charge like local charge and manpower and lot of competitions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13461538462 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59616345432 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573076923077 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 86.0 20.2975951904 424% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 243.993169303 49.4020404114 494% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 445.0 106.682146367 417% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 86.6666666667 20.7667163134 417% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 37.3333333333 7.06120827912 529% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26494390516 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179507435221 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535585303525 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14850685876 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686222629536 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 46.1 13.0946893788 352% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -15.81 50.2224549098 -31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.8 11.3001002004 326% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.66 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.79 8.58950901804 137% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.4 10.1190380762 360% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 37.0 10.7795591182 343% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ent compared with before, in this essay i will discuss the advantages and drawbac...
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Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...t help consumer to see all models/series ,and compare prices from many online web,...
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Line 2, column 264, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sories from online shop at cheaper price , secondly shopping timing at comfortable...
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Line 2, column 363, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...rly Morning, and wherever you are either at home in train,…, in addition to this ...
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Line 2, column 381, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...herever you are either at home in train,…, in addition to this the online shoppin...
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Line 2, column 597, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...any country you would like, for instance delivery terms of online shopping has po...
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...he only things that need to be clarified ,before starting the deal is the check th...
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...is the check the credibility of the shop ,and returning process to avoid any compl...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... hand retail shop has obsession consumer ,which the preferred the direct contact w...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...preferred the direct contact with sealer ,and checking and test products before ...
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...ntact with sealer ,and checking and test products before purchase it, considerin...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... ,and checking and test products before purchase it, considering the possibility...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...to take it as you pay for it, some store the change dispatch and delivered produc...
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... good income for many users and consumer , while the store retail full in direct c...
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Line 4, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ike local charge and manpower and lot of competitions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13461538462 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59616345432 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573076923077 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 86.0 20.2975951904 424% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 243.993169303 49.4020404114 494% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 445.0 106.682146367 417% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 86.6666666667 20.7667163134 417% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 37.3333333333 7.06120827912 529% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26494390516 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179507435221 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535585303525 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14850685876 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686222629536 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 46.1 13.0946893788 352% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -15.81 50.2224549098 -31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.8 11.3001002004 326% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.66 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.79 8.58950901804 137% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.4 10.1190380762 360% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 37.0 10.7795591182 343% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.