Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of job should be highly paid?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some individuals claim that celebrities who work in movies, music industry, or sports are overpaid. Personally, I agree with this opinion because there are many majors that are crucial for the development of every nation such as educational and healthcare services, and employees in these sectors should be paid properly.
It is true that nowadays, movie stars, famous singers and sport players are extremely highly paid although their works are just for entertaining and advertising purposes. With the high income, celebrities have chance for a luxury life, enjoy best services and high quality commodity. In contrast, other professions such as teachers and doctors who work really hard to create values for society have low income and they usually find it is difficult to obtain a good living standard for their families with a limited financial resources. For example, many teachers working in remote areas in Viet Nam receive just around five million VND per month and this salary is not appropriate with their sacrifices for children in these areas in particular, and national education overall.
Another work that should be highly paid is medical staffs who are passionate in saving people’ lives despite the fact that they have low salaries and work in infectious environment. Doctors in Vietnam can be taken as an example for the disadvantages of their careers. A five-year experience doctor is paid around seven million VND every month and because they have to spend most of their time in hospitals, his wife usually stay at home for taking care of children and doing housework. As a result, this low income can not afford their livelihood. Furthermore, surgeons received just forty thousand VND for a four-hour surgery even though they have to face with high risks of dangerous infectious diseases such as HIV, hepatitis from patients. There is no doubt that better incomes that contribute to ensure their families’ needs will make them happy and completely concentrate when working.
In conclusion, I agree with the view that movie stars and other famous people in music and sports are paid too much money, and higher salaries should be promoted to encourage other professions that are vital for life, including educational and healthcare employees.
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- Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money Do you agree or disagree Which other types of job should be highly paid Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your ow 78
- Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money Do you agree or disagree Which other types of job should be highly paid Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your ow 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 525, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'resource'?
Suggestion: resource
...their families with a limited financial resources. For example, many teachers working in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, really, so, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in particular, no doubt, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21917808219 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6729478162 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569863013699 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4897129543 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.538461538 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0769230769 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210010037658 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769354881926 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682656928715 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155525765465 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704712759843 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.