when children start school, teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development then their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is a well-established that when children enter school, teachers have more impact on their intellectual and social development than their parents. however, I deem that young children are influence by adults in their life. therefore, I totally disagree with this statement and my viewpoint will be elucidated in this essay.
In fact, children acquire knowledge since they were young. Admittedly, parents taught them almost everything they need such as: how to spell their names, how to hold chopsticks,... it seems like basic information. when children enter school, teachers will continue teach them about fundamental knowledge. however, children need to comprehensive development about behaviour and intellectual. Thus, parents and and teachers should have a collaboration to help children improve soft skills like: teamwork, problem-solving skills and have respect towards others. Moreover, since childhood, children should be likely to learn about educational approach and social constructivism In addition, in the school, have a wide range of students who children will play and study with them and teachers couldn't care much about all of them. this is the pivotal time, children will show their behavioral traits .therefore, children tent to look at their friends to improve their wisdom. learning from friends also is one of the most way to improve yourself. Furthermore, adults should pay attention about their behaviour because children have an inclination to observe and imitate.
In conclusion, both of them parties play vital roles in children's life and nobody could be likely to irreplaceable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57959183673 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99830300469 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.2945729337 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333053926121 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113132961674 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112412791443 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220182069545 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145341694149 0.056905535591 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.