TPO 6:
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Views differs when it comes to the convenience of life throughout the time. Some people are inclined toward the idea that life is easier today compare to the past. However, others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that life was more comfortable when our grandparents were children. In my perspective, life in the present day is easier that it was when our grandparents were juvenlies. I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons in the following paragraphs.
The first reason worth mentioning is that the developement of technology provide comfortable facilities for people. Nowadays, people can use faster vehilce like trains and airplanes for going to travel. They do not consume people like the old days which take a long time to reach the destination. Therefore, people do not become tired and easily get to the place they want visit. Moreover, people have access to the internet all around the world. In the past, people should go to the bank to tranfer their money but now they can easily transfer their currency without leaving house with the use of the internet. Also, there are subways for people to use which prevent traffic. many people use public transportation system in the past and because of that it causes major traffic. Nevertheless, the subway encourage people to use it since it helps them to not stuck in traffic and because of that the traffic decreased.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-07-18 | M. MEHRABI KERMANI | 60 | view |
| 2023-06-04 | nph | 70 | view |
| 2023-04-21 | rsheth05 | 60 | view |
| 2023-04-17 | sadasr | 73 | view |
| 2023-04-05 | Dat_Nguyen | 70 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 677, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...or people to use which prevent traffic. many people use public transportation system...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 233.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95708154506 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66061883654 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596566523605 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.946377225 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.5 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199865805109 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713843765496 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121559739916 0.0737576698707 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22378748731 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.214338197647 0.0645574589148 332% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.