You will go to London soon to stay there for one year. Write a letter to an agency to get information about accommodation. In your letter, you should say:
• why you are going to London
• what kind of accommodation you want
• when you will arrive
Dear Sir,
I am writing this to request you for finding accommodation for me to stay in London. My name is john and I am 26 years coming to London based on a project in my company. As this is the first time I'm visiting to UK and totally unaware of that place. Also, I don't have any friends or relatives there so, I thought to consult your agency based on your ratings found in online for finding suitable place to stay there.
I am coming to London to stay for one year. Actually, my company is offering me a studio apartment for 15 days during my initial days. So, I want an accommodation for later stay that too, I prefer to stay nearby office which saves my time. I don't mind even to share a room with male. It would be happy if the house is near to substation and the grocery stores.
I will be reaching there on 7th March at 10 am. My colleague is coming to airport to receive me as this is the first time. I hope you can find me a better accommodation at the time I reach there.
I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thanking you.
Yours faithfully,
Abc.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this to request you for fin...
^^^
Line 2, column 197, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...n my company. As this is the first time Im visiting to UK and totally unaware of t...
^^
Line 2, column 258, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... totally unaware of that place. Also, I dont have any friends or relatives there so,...
^^^^
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...days during my initial days. So, I want an accommodation for later stay that too, I prefer to st...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ay nearby office which saves my time. I dont mind even to share a room with male. It...
^^^^
Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... soon. Thanking you. Yours faithfully, Abc.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.17307692308 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38189981854 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3546726326 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.0 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264335340711 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960453582497 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971573461694 0.0603063233224 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176817107945 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067901198211 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.31 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this to request you for fin...
^^^
Line 2, column 197, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...n my company. As this is the first time Im visiting to UK and totally unaware of t...
^^
Line 2, column 258, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... totally unaware of that place. Also, I dont have any friends or relatives there so,...
^^^^
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...days during my initial days. So, I want an accommodation for later stay that too, I prefer to st...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ay nearby office which saves my time. I dont mind even to share a room with male. It...
^^^^
Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... soon. Thanking you. Yours faithfully, Abc.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.17307692308 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38189981854 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3546726326 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.0 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264335340711 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960453582497 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971573461694 0.0603063233224 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176817107945 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067901198211 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.31 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.