IN RECENT YEARS, MANY SMALL LOCAL SHOPS HAVE CLOSED BECAUSE CUSTOMER TRAVEL TO LARGE SHOPPING CENTRES OR MALLS TOO DO THEINR SHOPPING.
Nowadays shopping in large mall is status symbol and day by day large mall are increasing. People are not to ready to shop in small shops because they think small shopkeepers are not give a good quality and the effects of that small businesses are shutdown. Today we are discuss both side of coin.
The people are shopping in big shopping market because they are offering a number of verity of same product and give a discount and cash back offers on daily routine product for attract the more people for shopping for an example in mega city of India called Mumbai, almost 80 to 110 shopping malls are running today and some are under construction. People are going every day for buying. Other things is big supermarkets are give freedom for choose product yourself and also accepted different ways of payment methods like credit card, debit card, online app payment and many more so the small shops are effected very badly and they are near to close down.
The other side of small businessman are facing difficulties to survive in big cities but in small town still small shops are running and earning good wealth because the people are not aware or educated or the distance of the city to far. And its happened in cities also because middle and lower class people are still purchase in small shops because they have very shoe string budget every month or daily survives. To the survey of 2015 in India 60 % people are purchase product in small shops. Other cause of small shopkeeper are give him installment for payments like people give money on next month billing. As of day the government are give a opperchunities for explore the business.
To the sum up, large shopping mall are take place of small shops so it is a very negative effects on small businesses, but government are run some program for explore the small business.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'discussed'.
Suggestion: discussed
...l businesses are shutdown. Today we are discuss both side of coin. The people are sho...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'shod', 'shodden', 'shoed'.
Suggestion: shod; shodden; shoed
...e in small shops because they have very shoe string budget every month or daily surv...
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Line 3, column 645, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ling. As of day the government are give a opperchunities for explore the business...
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Line 4, column 91, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...of small shops so it is a very negative effects on small businesses, but government are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69040247678 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32776419127 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479876160991 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.8703920645 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.25 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9166666667 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310855536319 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12181562215 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101982008371 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237635727253 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596306708782 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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