There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
In today's modern world, various kinds of music have been entranced and its number is getting more day in, day out. This essay will argue the essence of music in our lives and in continuous a comparison between traditional and international musics will be done.
According to psychological theories, our spirits need food as same as our bodies and the food of our spirit is music. To be more specific, music lifts our spirits and fosters them. For instance, I usually listen to music when I am down and it takes the weight of my mind even for ten minutes so that I could continue my work with more confidence and energy. Researchers believe that music has a significant effect on all alive specious. There is a growing body of research which suggest that playing music for cows will make them produce more milk.
In my opinion, traditional music is more more important than international type. All traditional musics have evolved over hundreds of years that they shouldn't be superseded by modern music simply, Moreover, traditional music incorporated our cultural values. Nowadays, although youth are reluctant to tradition and keen on international music with bump rhythm which tempts more violence but I believe schools should put more emphasis on worth of traditional music and the history that it carries from our ancestors. Besides, Traditional music inspires more peace.
In conclusion, music playing an essential role in our lives and ignoring its influence is illogical. In addition, traditional music should be taken more notice to prevent from forgetting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12451361868 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7759694067 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587548638132 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9375115701 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.307692308 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389563066209 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176382755627 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793418357637 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256451945781 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803367515805 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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