The picture below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The picture below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture illustrates the process of how old and disused glass bottles are recycled.
The process includes 3 stages and 12 steps beginning with wasted glass bottles are collected and ending with them being ready again for sale on the market.
Initially, disused glass bottles are collected and gathered at a collection point. Then, these bottles are put on a truck or a van to be transported to the place where they are meant to go through high-pressure water. After that, wasted glass bottles are categorized by colors into 3 different types: brown, green and clear. Next, the bottles are brought to the glass factory. At the factory, old glass bottles are smashed into pieces and are prepared to be burnt in furnace at a considerably high temperature, at about 600-800 degrees Celsius. The following step requires mixing the recycled liquid glass and the new liquid glass together and then the mixture is poured into the glass mould to be shaped. Finally, the recycled glass bottles are transported to supermarkets and they are ready for sale.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98863636364 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59526647145 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2354628229 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5555555556 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218237246964 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106138165818 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398374610529 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16064504434 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340652060896 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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