the diagram below shows the life cycle of cotton t-shirt.
The rendered diagram illustrates the manufacturing, usage, and disposal of a Cotton t-shirt. This is a human intervention process.
Overall, it is a complex and time-consuming process. it has various steps and the initial step is cotton cultivation whereas the final one is the disposal of the t-shirt.
To begin with, cotton seeds are sown in fields after the maturation of the crop, cotton balls are harvested by the cotton pickers. Thereafter, the harvest is delivered to the factory where the cotton fiber is set parallel for the process of spinning from which cotton yarn is obtained. this yarn is weaved into the fabric which is colored and cleaned before cutting and sewing. the produced t-shirts are shipped and then packed for the purpose of marketing. subsequently, the customer purchases a t-shirt of his or her own choice from the retail shops or the stores.
The consumer uses the t-shirt and finally dispose of it by any of the three processes- reuse, reduce and recycle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
...s a complex and time-consuming process. it has various steps and the initial step ...
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Suggestion: This
...ing from which cotton yarn is obtained. this yarn is weaved into the fabric which is...
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Suggestion: The
... and cleaned before cutting and sewing. the produced t-shirts are shipped and then ...
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Suggestion: Subsequently
...en packed for the purpose of marketing. subsequently, the customer purchases a t-shirt of hi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce from the retail shops or the stores. The consumer uses the t-shirt and finall...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, then, whereas, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05454545455 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74657144985 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587878787879 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.352810976 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220124588954 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811690037962 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754246108464 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130644222804 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534924730753 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.