You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• say how you felt about the visit
• refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with
him/her
• invite your friend to visit you
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to include addresses.
Begin your letter as follows: Dear ....................,
Dear Mk,
Sorry for not being in touch for ages, things have been very chaotic since I came back.It was lovely seeing you after such a long time.It brough back such great memories.
I must admit, river rafting was the most fun activity we did. I cannot beleive I had so much fun doing all the adventure sports. If it had'nt for you, i had never known that I was an adreline junkie. Of course I should mention the look on your face while we were rafting, you were horrified. I laughed so hard, i ws in stiches.
I would love to have you over. We can visit the quaint ittile town here and as well as see the bright lighs of the city. The market at ake district is awesome and the mountains as well within reach.
Once again, let me know when we can meet again and looking forward to catching up soon
Lots of love
dsss
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ave been very chaotic since I came back.It was lovely seeing you after such a long...
^^
Line 2, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ovely seeing you after such a long time.It brough back such great memories. I m...
^^
Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
...n doing all the adventure sports. If it hadnt for you, i had never known that I was a...
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Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... adventure sports. If it hadnt for you, i had never known that I was an adreline ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, while, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 668.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20125786164 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.98166110537 2.54303337028 78% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.735849056604 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1103477921 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.8 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179406263749 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637657237767 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712241189257 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901639355193 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581584543834 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.