The line graph shows the number of trips to other countries by UK residents for various purposes between 1989 and 2001.
The line graph and the table give information about the number of foreign tours that the UK citizens took place for 4 distinct purposes from 1992 to 2001.
Overall, it is clear that the UK people prefered traveling abroad on holidays to the remaining reasons. Besides, the number of trips was the highest in the UK in the 1989-2001 period.
At the starting point in 1989, the holidays was the major reason why people traveled abroad with 30 million trips, which was significantly higher than other reasons, roughly 8 million trips for the business, around 5 million trips for the family visits and the other purposes. In spite of a sharp decreasing trend from 1998, the figure of the holidays was approximately 40 million journeys, compared to 12 million trips for the family visits and 8 million trips for the business and about 2 million trips for other purposes.
Additionally, it is clear that the total number of trips had a dramatic growth from 47 million in 1989 to 73.5 million in 1998, which was the highest figure in the table. Nevertheless, the figure suddenly dropped to 61 in 2001 along with the rapid decrease of tours for the holidays.
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| 2020-05-19 | Thang Tran | 73 | view |
- Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed if they are used as money making attractions aimed at tourists Others however believe that is the only way to save these traditions Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 70
- International travel is becoming cheaper and cheaper, and more countries are now opening their doors to foreign visitors. Do you think that the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages? 84
- the chart below shows the percentage of male and female who did various free time activities in England in 2006 82
- The map describes the change of a park from 1980 to now 68
- More and more people in the city live in homes with small spaces or no outdoor areas Do you think it is a negative or positive development 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, nevertheless, so, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52436130536 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8808495053 43.030603864 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.571428571 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28597167861 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149958027481 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845700207168 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190244998552 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526149441816 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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