Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that in the hectic and competitive world we live in, people are striving to achieve success in their lives. While some people believe that it is better to adhere to what they know well, Others stand at the other side of continuum, stating that taking risks and trying new things lead to fruitful path of success. As far as I am concerned, I concur with the aforementioned notion that taking risks and trying new things results in success. The reasons to substantiate my point of view are elaborated upon hereunder.
First of all, the people inclined to take risks and try new things are extremely brave and courageous which are beneficial characteristics that stimulates people in their path towards success. It is no doubt that courage and brevity are like fuels that galvanize people to take the steps necessary for success, even if they seem to be dangerous and risky. To be more specific, take a business man as an example who establishes a company to produce alcoholic synthesizers during the great suffrage of Corona virus. Although most of workforce happen to be confined at their home and people rarely step out of their houses to go shopping, alcoholic synthesizers play a pivotal role in protection from virus and cleaning the stuff. As a result, the so-called businessman can make significant profits during the depression and become a successful company owner, while commencement of such a business seemed extremely risky that normal people would not dare to take such a risky step. Therefore the courage and brevity of risk-takers fuels them in their path towards success.
Furthermore, people gain significant and precious experiences that will be beneficial for their success in the future, even if their attempts of risks result in contemporary failure at the present situation. It is crystal clear that the previously obtained experiences and the lessons people get from them, will guide them in their future attempts and prevent them from making the same mistakes. A personal example can drive this fact home. When I was working on an experiment in the laboratory, I decided to try a new method to cut short the time needed for the experiment. Although the new method happened to be inadequate and ineffective, it provided me the shortcomings of the method I chose by analyzing the data from the experiment. Taking the previously done mistakes into account and correcting them, I successfully finished the experiment in two weeks, whereas it was not possible to achieve such a result in less than three weeks. Without taking risks and considering what I have learned from my failure experience, it would be impossible to make such a significant success.
In conclusion, taking the aforementioned reasons and examples into account, I believe that taking risks and trying new things is a pivotal step towards success. It not only requires a significant spirit of courage and brevity to take such steps, but also provides precious experiences and information for risk-taker which will be valuable for further success in the future even if he/she fails to achieve it in current moment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 980, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...uld not dare to take such a risky step. Therefore the courage and brevity of risk-takers ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2610.0 1615.20841683 162% => OK
No of words: 518.0 315.596192385 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03861003861 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83242464305 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480694980695 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 820.8 506.74238477 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2806989705 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.368421053 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2631578947 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42105263158 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211306981041 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767432482953 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654183653191 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154900637675 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556774815497 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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