In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare.
A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future.To what extend do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Owing to the dramatic increase of the elderly in the world, it has put a lot of strain on public finances, therefore, there are many arguments whether people should pay for health insurance out of their pockets in the future. While I tend to disagree with this solution, I also see an undeniable fact of running private hospitals in parallel with state-funded ones.
Firstly, public healthcare ensures that ageing people, especially, who are less financial advantage are entitled to free treatment, regardless of income, as it is a basic human right. Consequently, the elderly have pretty much valued the system for preventing them from worrying about the affordability of medical care. They also feel the sense of being treated equally as it is the universal medical service. Secondly, lack of government funding for heathcare can cause health problems for the public. As a result of this, it will lead to even more costs and serious risks to the community’s health. For instance, in most countries, patients, especially those who come from labour class get infected by tuberculousis disease have received free treatment from governments. This support is viewed as the the most essential step to actively protect the whole nation from being attacked by infectious diseases.
However, too much spending on public health sector will create burdens on tax payers. In the long run, if payments for this sector are not calculated prudently, it might lead to a budget deficit. In this way, tax payers might either be deprived a benefit from a completely free healthcare system or not receive an adequately medical quality standard when they get older.
In conclusion, I personally believe that government should still maintain the public healthcare systems rather than merely opt to the path of private ones. However, to reduce the over expenditure of state-owned fund on public medical care, private hospitals should be encouraged to develop too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20382165605 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77574034664 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624203821656 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6844697943 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.714285714 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203323323341 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637188040528 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422427545163 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11855198556 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220171501476 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.