To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
In this argument, author state that to understand the most important characteristics of a society is studying its major cities. Some people might believe that it is a crucial point. However, the following essay will argue that it is plausible to disagree with the author's statement and present following reasons to support this point of view.
Admittedly, main cities in that society have many important characteristics because most of people live in the major cities due to its infrastructure. For example, in Korea, almost half of people live in Seoul city which is capital city. By looking careful of that city, we can feel how Korean people are works in the business and attributes their culture. Also, most foreign travelers are tour major cities to learn and feel the society.
However, it is not only major cities have most important character of their society. For instance, some rural areas have major issues on why the young age people are avoiding to work in rural areas. We need to carefully scrutinize the rural area so we can understand the trends of society.
Finally, every cities have different characteristic of societies so we should approach with different perspective. To be specific, unlike small society, US have many states and each of them have different characteristics so it is hard to define the one most important characteristics of whole US society. Therefore, to understand all of them, people should study their histories and even government policies to know their society.
To sum up, I do not agree with the statement that study major cities is need to understand the most important characteristics of one’s society. The word “most important” is quite vague and other components of learning can help to understand one’s society not only study for the major cities. Because of these reasons, I disagree with the
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...at it is plausible to disagree with the authors statement and present following reasons...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... many important characteristics because most of people live in the major cities due to its inf...
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Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r cities to learn and feel the society. However, it is not only major cities hav...
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Line 9, column 338, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se of these reasons, I disagree with the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 305.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12131147541 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87431610879 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491803278689 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4479660548 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.625 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455348242012 0.243740707755 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161081091362 0.0831039109588 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166285823488 0.0758088955206 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268625862042 0.150359130593 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108998573218 0.0667264976115 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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