Although modern life has improved people's standard of living, people are not generally happy with their lives
It had become a common knowledge that even when our life has been becoming more and more convenient in the past few decades thanks to the advancements of modern life, many people are not happy. This essay will analyze the causes of this seemingly unreasonable unhappiness.
To fully understand this matter, we need to grasp the meaning of happiness. To me, in short, it indicates a state in which people feel satisfied and more important thankful. However, modern life seems to have little ability to provide these feelings.
Although technology has made our life much easier, it also made us ungrateful. Fifty years ago, if you wanted to communicate with a friend living abroad, you would have to pay lots of money and wait for days for every written letter. Because of all the difficulties one has to overcome, receiving a reply provokes an intense feeling of delight and thankfulness in the correspondents. Now, it takes a few seconds for messages to travel around the globe through a free platform. So convenient it had become for us that we see it as a trivial activity, just as many utilities out there. As a result, we lose our appreciation of lots of improved things.
Moreover, modern life also makes it harder to have satisfaction. The reason for this is because there always seems to be something better than what we possess. Human nature is greedy, and modern life encourages it with many options for everything. For instance, your phone might not be the best in the market since there are so many versions of phones, and even if it is the best now, it will be replaced shortly. This makes some people, especially ones who are only pleased when they have the best belongings, unfulfilled.
Based on what we have discussed, it is safe to say that ancient people were happier than we are nowadays. If we do not find a way to be happy in whatever situation, the future will bring even more misery.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 86, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
... have satisfaction. The reason for this is because there always seems to be something bett...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, second, so, as to, for instance, in short, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7754491018 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67078790536 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6710364232 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6111111111 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165965802787 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452562574848 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04597986241 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861174036904 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174210869043 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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