In many countries, mainly tourists, but not local people, visit museums and historical sites. Why does this happen and what can be done to attract more people to visit these places?
In recent times, museums and heritage locations- places of history’s archives, appeal mainly among individuals living in close proximity is subsiding, but the zeal and enthusiasm in overseas visitors for these sites remain unchanged. This essay will shed light on the reasons inflicting this variation and solutions to this menace.
As far as reasons are concerned, the major one is local’s negligence. They exploit the fact that historical places are never going to disappear and being living close to them, they have the luxury to visit them whenever they like. Apart from this, another fact is that today life has become so fast that people find it very difficult to manage their work and life. Therefore, sparing time to visit museums in their day-to-day life becomes next to impossible. Moreover, management of historical places is also to blame for the losing interest of locals. This is because, seldom changes are made in these places and this lack of innovation makes the visits monotonous for visitors. As a result, the place becomes boring and subsequent visits of people become unlikely.
Coming to solutions, the most effective measure would be to popularise museums and historical locations with interactive add-ons with which visitors could interact like by taking pictures to remember the place. To cite an example, madame taussauds is a very popular museum in London where wax figures of various famous personalities from all over the world are showcased and people often interact with them during the visits. Furthermore, promotion campaigns can be initiated in which local residents could get the privilege of free entry passes, thereby boosting the local traffic.
To conclude, not only natives but the museums’ and heritage locations’ authorities are also responsible for the emergence of this disturbing trend. However, with planned promotional schemes the place of museums in society can be re-established.
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Suggestion: proximity
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...ce. To cite an example, madame taussauds is a very popular museum in London where...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, apart from, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38360655738 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74420549523 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9543613322 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.285714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295940776575 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915867323884 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378875316556 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155798585745 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489221543817 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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