Crime rate is decrease compared to the past due to the advance in technology as it can prevent and solve the crime. To what extent you agree or disagree.
There is a significant decrease in the crime in recent year and some of the people have opinion that advancement in the technology is played a vital role in lowering this number. I firmly agree with the statement that invention in science have greatly impacted the crime rate by preventing it and solving it.
In the past few years, the crime was at peak and there were maximum case left unsolved because of lack of evidences. The invention of cameras is the most overwhelming advancement as these act as an eye on everyone under them and resulted best for surveillance. Nowadays, the cameras and surveillance systems are install in most of the shopping malls and almost all the average shops for security purposes as they ensure to keep the track of unusual behavior of the customer and unusual activities taking place in the surrounding. These cameras have minimized the threat of theft in the shops which earlier was very common in jewelry shops, stores and also in houses especially for the thing that are on displayed and that customer is trying.
Additionally, they also helped in solving serious crimes like abduction and kidnap as now GPS security system are there which help to track the location of the offender by parents or legal authorities. Apart from this, mobile stealing was also raising but now because of the salient features of this technology phone can immediately retrieved owing to the updated technology.
To conclude, there is no doubt that the technology has help in preventing and solving a lot of cases hence, updated technology with new advancement is need of the time otherwise many of the cases would have left unsolved and many of the crime would have been committed without fear.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ecrease in the crime in recent year and some of the people have opinion that advancement in...
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Line 2, column 313, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'installed'.
Suggestion: installed
...he cameras and surveillance systems are install in most of the shopping malls and almos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, apart from, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90378006873 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64610612691 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553264604811 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.7113638409 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.555555556 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3333333333 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221226779658 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891860084715 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748616998863 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141640057569 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862552401625 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.