The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them not by their contemporaries.
To qualify the arbitrary statement, I believe that whether the impact is instantaneously will affect the judgments of the public futher influence the evaluation of the greatness of individuals.
As the technology rapidly progresses, smartphones, the Internet and artificial intelligence have become the inalienable products in modern society and behaviors of people have been influenced without consciousness. Thus, the greatness of the inventor and the scientists of above revolutionary technology are globally-recognized by contemporaries. For example, most of the electronic devices, such as auto-pilot cars, smarphones, laptops, and wearable devices, are drived and controlled by tiny but critical components called integrated circuits. Compared to understandable discrete circuits, which are composed by eye-scale components, such as battery, resistors, capacitors and inductors, intergrated circuits adopt micrometer-scale transistors, which are made of semiconductors, to fullfill functionalities. It's the technology that enabled the size of transistors can be limited in micrometer and futher limit the size of our electronic devices. The prevalence of such devices are the reflection of greatness of the inventors.
Besides, the contributions to the public health are prominent as well, which not only save millions of people who have suffered from pandemic and endemic, but prevent the rest of the world from being pagued by deadly diseases. For example, Taiwan was regarded as the most vulnerable country affected by the pandemic, COVID-19, at the begining of the outbreak; however, led by the commander of public health expert, the government took the very early stage precautions on limits on surgical facial masks and travel bans to prevent the pandemic from spreading in Taiwan. Until now, the total number of infections of the whole world are more than three hundred thousands, which is still on the exponential rise, but that of Taiwan is merely less than two hundred with no clues that we are under the threat of community infections. Most of Taiwanese are grateful to the commander and the medicine staff who stood in the front line to combat the deadly virus, and even European and the American reporters have appraised the performance of the virus control.
To conclude, I believe the greatness of individuals will be recognized when their impacts has deeply influenced the whole society.
- The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them not by their contemporaries 83
- The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them not by their contemporaries 66
- As we acquire more knowledge things do not become more comprehensible but more complex and mysterious 77
- In our region of Trillura the majority of money spent on the schools that most students attend the city run public schools comes from taxes that each city government collects The region s cities differ however in the budgetary priority they give to public 80
- It s primary through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 811, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...onductors, to fullfill functionalities. Its the technology that enabled the size of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, still, thus, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 58.6224719101 143% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2882.0 2235.4752809 129% => OK
No of words: 523.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51051625239 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17751998636 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541108986616 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 896.4 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8424782418 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.684210526 118.986275619 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5263157895 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168618515493 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571851871839 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114529007195 0.0758088955206 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907227298743 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565129414879 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.38706741573 118% => OK
difficult_words: 164.0 100.480337079 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.8971910112 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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