Some people believe that studying in a college or university is the best way for students to prepare for their future career. Others think they should leave school as soon as possible to develop their career through work experience. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
University degree or work experience which is more important it is the hottest debate of the time. It is reckoned by some individuals that higher degree plays a crucial role in attaining the set goals of life, rather others have a thought work experience helps to get more reliable job opportunities. In the consequent paragraphs, I will discuss both the views following that, I will discuss my opinion.
To begin with, it is thought by most people that degree is wastage of three years, instead of wasting them they like to utilize them but getting experience. There are some fields that do not need a degree but need an adequate experience which helps one to be better job opportunities, for example, carpentry. In such a field, a degree does not play any role as it depends on one’s competency to make designs as per the customer demands. Moreover, there are lots of skills that a person cannot learn through studies such as leadership, humbleness, and tolerance etcetera. The resume with more experience is prioritized more over the educated on because most of the company want well qualified employees as they do not like to waste time and money on giving training
On the other hand, getting educated from university and grabbing a degree is much important to achieve life goals. Most of the time, it has been seen that the basic eligibility criteria are degree or graduation in the most renowned company as they want a well qualified employee in their team instead of experienced without degrees. These degrees equip them with the required skills and knowledge which is required to lend the job. For instance, the higher management levels are always occupied by a student with master of business administration degree instead of an experienced employee.
To conclude, both have their own merits and demerits but I tend to incline with the fact that students should pursue higher education before getting experience as it gives a better future perspective than work experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97897897898 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73906470322 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546546546547 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.1904385172 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.166666667 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169377599766 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610949666513 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386424986915 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111114412237 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311811850383 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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