Schools are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history Some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Schools are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history. Some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education has been a controversial issue. While some people believe that instructing traditional subjects such as history is necessary, others claim that looking at the present, developing the future is the most important thing so we need to be taught skills which can support students to get a career. Personally, I agree that students should be learned skilfulness to looking for a better job.
Firstly, most schools do not guide communication and presentation ability. Students tend to be afraid or trembling when speaking in public or expressing their opinions to everyone. That will severely affect their teamwork ability as well as future leadership.
Moreover, students not only lack of skills but also lack of knowledge of information technology such as PowerPoint, word, excel... the basic things but indispensable.
In conclusion, learning skills are the most important thing if you want a stable job and a high salary.

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