Zoos are sometimes seen as necessary but poor alternatives to a natural environment. Discuss some of the arguments for and against keeping animals in zoos and give your own opinion.
At the present time, zoos are getting popular in our society, and this brings out the altercation of whether zoos are momentous or it is a narrow choice to malicious to the environment. Although there are some robust logics against it, I confide that animals should be free, which means zoos are unnecessary to me. However, I shall scrutinies both views in the subsequent essay.
On the one hand, there are some presumable reason why people might argue that zoos are crucial. The first and foremost reason could be peoples education towards animals. Inhabitant can learn about animal's habit by visiting zoos, And zoos also a place to spend spare time for individuals.
Another cause might be, zoos attract children. Parents take their children to zoos to see animals solidarity so that they can boost their self-esteem. Children can feed those caged animals; thus, they become responsible.
On the other hand, despite the above arguments, I still uphold the view that animals have rights to move freely in the forest. There are two significant points why I deem this. One is, by caging animals mother environment lose their foothold, whereas they have the same freedom as humans.
Other forasmuch is, in zoos animals often face with lots of ailments. The authority does not care them well and keep them appetite. Owing to which they die. The example of a Bangladeshi zoo; where a few days ago some photographs of lions are shown on social media that, they are getting thin by not having proper take care.
In conclusion, it can not be repudiated that zoos have some benefits towards dwellers but set animals free and help them to live there life have more merits considering the environment in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, thus, well, whereas, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90721649485 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47644993671 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628865979381 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8144569884 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222538246001 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647656800345 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051431223024 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112760090819 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342852321159 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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