Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing sports can teach people lessons about the life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Life is colorful and meaningful, which means people can draw on something valuable and helpful through different kinds of activities during life time. Playing sports plays an important role in daily life. I agree with that doing sport is not only a behavior, but can teach people a lot about the life as well.
First of all, the best approach to improve communication skill is taking part in sports team. When you play sports with plenty of people, such as going hiking and soccer, it is inevitable to cooperate with others and that offers the chance to learn about how to get along well with people around you. Human being is social animal so we need to acquire the skills about group working. If you are a shy person and have no idea about making friends, join the sports and you will be more likely to change yourself into a social person. And besides, people naturally show up their personal characters before other’s eyes when they are addicted in playing sports. It is an opportunity to find out good behaviors and imitate them and on the contrary, to realize some inappropriate behaviors and attempt to avoid doing them. Soon after, you can better yourself and achieve success in every field of life. Thus, playing sports proves a lesson that help people to associate with others and self- improvement.
Moreover, as we all know, competition happened constantly during life, especially in sports. People frequently get trouble in dealing with victory or defeat and fortunately it is a necessary lesson people can be educated from sports. Participating in numerous sports means facing the difficult situation about winning and losing again and again. In this process, people effort to view the consequence with calm attitude and try their best to meet next challenge. Take me for example, I used to be afraid of competing with classmates and usually chose to stay away from match. One day I started to play sports game with my friends and immersed in that intense but exciting atmosphere. I changed my attitude towards competition and overcame the sense of fear. Thanks to sports, this lesson taught me how to handle with competition emotions and now I have confidence on treating it bravely and reaching the successful aim in the future.
Furthermore, playing sorts is of importance in developing the enthusiasm for life. There are varieties of advantages generated by sports, such as fostering a hobby, keeping your body health and enjoying the world environment. To be more specific, when people are occupied with work or study, they are willing to set up a basketball game together in order to release the accumulated pressure and take relax; when people get tired since sitting in front of computer for a long lime, it is a useful method to go jogging around city park and breathe flesh air even arouse the awareness of healthy; when people have to stay in home, feeling boring and having no courage with job, doing simple sports such as yoga, they will refresh their mind and obtain enough energy to work harder. There is a proverb that play sports and create better life, that is why I mentioned sports activities do come in handy.
To put it in a nut shell, I am all for that playing sports can teach people lessons about the life.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...gh different kinds of activities during life time. Playing sports plays an important role...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, such as, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 52.1666666667 169% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2703.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 559.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83542039356 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86242540663 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51519681812 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 307.0 212.727598566 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549194991055 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 829.8 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.6312210513 48.9658058833 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.625 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2916666667 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.79166666667 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366049293347 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107048614142 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879413115048 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24176976516 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650886286158 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...gh different kinds of activities during life time. Playing sports plays an important role...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, such as, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 52.1666666667 169% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2703.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 559.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83542039356 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86242540663 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51519681812 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 307.0 212.727598566 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549194991055 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 829.8 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.6312210513 48.9658058833 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.625 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2916666667 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.79166666667 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366049293347 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107048614142 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879413115048 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24176976516 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650886286158 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.