In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other
concerns.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.
Undoubtedly, several nations mainstream the economic progress and overlook the other aspects. Even though concentration on monetary growth turn the countries financially independent, still ignorance of other pivotal concern would lead to the annihilation of mankind. I cogitate that countries should not prioritize the economic success at the cost of other imperative issues.
Since focus on financial success would make them free from all economic woes, thus they continuously craft such policies which would guarantee them exorbitant gain. Seemingly, eminent nations which are financially strong usually devote a lion share of their budget for the development of social as well as physical infrastructures and endow every essential amenities to their denizens.Consequently, the citizenry enjoy the quality and contented life while residing in developed nations. Also it is biased to overlook the
fact documented by WHO that super economic powers such as U.S.A always spend colossal amounts to bestow comfortable life to its citizenry.
On the other hand, some insane capitalistic economies constantly follow the money driven approach and focus on the economic growth at any cost. Being laissez- faire nations, they believe in the mass industrialization and do not consider about the severe repercussions on commoners. To exemplify, as per the report published by New York Times that in order to save the economy from collapse during the pandemic named COVID-19 China did not implement the lockdown effectively and countless innocent
people lost their life. Therefore, the economic progress at the sacrifice of humankind is not bonafide on long term.
In conclusion, although financial sustainability alleviate all the hassles of humans by ensuring them comfortable lives, the extreme capitalism would leads to extinction of human beings .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72101449275 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13140219869 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.11405127 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.545454545 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132199158208 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053690831216 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469954494077 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0613807573274 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590936064481 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.65 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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