Some people believe that the whole family (grandparents, uncles, aunts) bringing up children is better rather than only parents.
What is your opinion?
This notion has different viewpoints. Some individuals in the society argue that children are the sole responsibility of parent hence, should be only responsible in the upbringing of their offspring’s, rather others are of the view that children should be brought up in the joint family where everyone such as grandparents, parents, uncles, and aunts exists. In my point of view, I tend to incline with the latter opinion.
To begin with, first and foremost thing while bringing up children is their care and in the joint family, it becomes an easy task as there are lots of members apart from mother and father someone else can take responsibility for children. In this competitive era, most of the time both the parents are busy and committed to their work hence, being in the joint family helps them in relaxing as they are aware of the fact that their children will be fed properly and even their homework will be completed. The joint plays vital role special in adverse conditions such a sickness, accident or any other health-related issue. Therefore, in the joint family, one can concentrate on career and work without any distractions.
Secondly, the joint family teaches different values such as flexibility and adjustability, which plays a crucial role in the long run. The person who is brought up in such an environment can adjust in their married life or when they have to spend independent life in a new or totally different environment, which becomes a difficult task for the ones who are nurtured with all comforts and fewer adjustments in nuclear families. Children living in the joint family learn the dynamics of human psychology as he is staying with different people with different attitudes, perceptions, and behavior, which in turn helps in strengthening the tolerance power. These qualities help the person to understand others and their emotions.
Lastly, the most overwhelming feature of a joint family is there is no attention-related problem which a by-product of a nuclear family where parents are busy with their stuff and have no time for their children. Hence, children of the small family are more prone to depict sad, indolent, and reclusive behavior.
To conclude, in joint family children are brought up by different people and develop different qualities such as flexibility, adjustability, selflessness, and understanding. For working parents, it is like a blessing as they can have reliable and trustworthy caretakers for their children hence, a joint family gives the best environment bringing up of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, apart from, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2154.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17788461538 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97404638886 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492788461538 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 658.8 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.7281491434 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.6 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7333333333 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176497825562 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609560383332 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055249281403 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119512975277 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505222020069 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.