Topic: Today it is common practice for many business meetings and business training to take place online. Do the advantages of this new development outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that online business conferencing or business training has currently become commonplace in many cities due to the outbreak of Coronavirus pandemic. While I understand that critics may see this as an ineffective method, I suppose that the merits would eclipse the downsides.
There are two main reasons why people might disapprove of the use of online chatroom for business reunion or training. Firstly, this approach is likely to leak private information of users. Take Zoom as an example. One state of America, Massachusetts, has recently reported that it appears some strangers breaking into several chat rooms of Zoom shouting vulgar language or releasing hostile messages. Secondly, people hardly express their idea clearly or even miss several essential information when using online business conferencing in case the internet connection is not steady enough.
In spite of the drawbacks mentioned above, I believe that the use of online business reunion is a positive measure. The key objective of this approach is to save a significant amount of time and money. In particular, the expenses for gas to commute to work or a parking slot can be minimized to the lowest. Furthermore, it is no longer time-consuming because we do not have to travel back and forth to work.
In conclusion, it seems to me that we gain more than we loose from making use of online business conferencing.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-04-08 | Jennynguyen18 | 56 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, as to, i suppose, in conclusion, in particular, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13100436681 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93469925489 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650655021834 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4968787919 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9166666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220281812214 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710464036588 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582266840987 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123934722012 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365419522974 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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