Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problems in many countries.
Explain the main causes and its alarming effects in the future.
Obesity has become an issue for adolescents in various countries and has been increasing rapidly in recent years.
In the following paragraphs, the essay will discuss the plausible reasons for this concern and diagnosticate the adverse effects of the disease.
On the one hand, there are real factors to provoke overweight disease. Offsprings are consuming junk and processed foods over the home-made food because they find good taste in these type of flavours which are low in nutrients such as Mcdonalds, Dominos, Domestic and International products. The other cause of these chronic issues that are poor lifestyle which means young ones do not want to engage in indoor and outdoor activities and less interest in doing any physical exercise that could be useful to them. For example, they do not want to deviate from the leisure activities that maybe television, mobile and other gadgets.
On the other hand, A lot of adverse effects of the stoutness. Firstly, Juveniles can suffer from lifestyle diseases that may be diabetes, hypertension, cardiovascular disease and more physical disorders. Secondly, it impacts their psychological health such as low self-esteem, lack of confidence and personality of an introvert. Also, low life expectancy, longevity and negative consequences have influenced the child one’s life. According to new statistics by the World Health Organisation, teenagers are likely most prevalence of this syndrome problems.
To recapitulate, As I aforementioned above, Overweight and obesity in childhood are known to have a significant impact on both physical and psychological health. Also, it has proven as deleterious for youth generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5486381323 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08643469445 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642023346304 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0140808575 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.692307692 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.073634365643 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0250975520293 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386083461028 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518129320799 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414651269022 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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