You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel.
Write a letter to the hotel for making the arrangement. Let them know:
when you will be arriving and leaving
what type of rooms you would like and ask how much the weekend will cost
inquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel
Dear Sir or Madam,
This is to let you know that me and my family has decided to spent the next weekend in a resort which is close to the sea. After researching through the Internet, we have finalised Atasa Resort, as it is convenient for us both in terms of Location and budget.
I would like to discuss our plain in brief with you. First of all we would like to commence our journey on 12th April and intend to stay for 3 nights. During our visit we want to stay in 1 bhk apartment available with you, as we are family of 3 which includes my wife and 5 year old son. We enjoy watching the calm sea through our balcony and therefore request you to book a sea-facing room for us.
Apart from this we would like to enquire, what would be the cost of the room and which activities it includes? While going through your website we have come across a plethora of activities your resort have to offer, so we are excited to treat ourselves with wide range of activities this weekend and bring a lot of memories with us when we return. Also, we want you to guide us through different places which are of cultural interest.
Could you please revert us back with all the required information, so that we can go ahead and book the resort at the earliest.
Thanks and Regards,
Kutub.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'son' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sons'.
Suggestion: sons
...3 which includes my wife and 5 year old son. We enjoy watching the calm sea through...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, therefore, while, apart from, in brief, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36099585062 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3014798778 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576763485477 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4230549317 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5454545455 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 4.34317383033 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182247536562 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810296244695 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500471084823 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116933004178 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265510167205 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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