Some people think that genetically modified crops are positive development other however argue that they are potentially dangerous Discuss of both view

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Some people think that genetically modified crops are positive development other, however argue that they are potentially dangerous. Discuss of both view

Different from of media highlights at the farmer ata using a new technology there are on on wonder there is a going awareness about it there are the contrasting perception is this matter prominent declare that the modified crops are positive and hybrid cross conversely the criticize are you did the people things about about among the people are not thinking but there are thinking power negative opinion after a closed scrutiny of both side.
On one hand It is a believe that the farmer are hardworking to gained a seeds.Various evidence can be given the boxer this time the most prominent reason is that people are thing the genital crops used in seeds. view exit because a profitable the east time required to and earn more money and earn lot of money as a result in our daily requirement it is a huge of Gain and seed. In addition it is also saying that hybrid crops are more faster and growth at that time the growth and quality it is defined to value. This reason is buoyed in the fact that farmer are less work and high court in this is important part .Consequently it is a major step to profit the fact that mango, orange and many vegetables are available in all the season.
In sharp contract,there is an argument that many people are think modified crops are potentially dangerous these open a is based on a couple of observations. One of the most convincing factor is that the crops are modified to not more vitamins and time to develop but hybrid fruits and vegetables compared to old crops.This factor is taken into account has there are a need and base quality and more effective to modify the crops .Therefore, argued that eating in modified crops.In the future the human body and many problems.Moreover ,almost everyone not is that the past life and the present life it is a more different when people are still worked in a long time. There are on more in illunsse is many ampere v evidence to indicate that the cancer is example of the modified crops and plastics used.
As far as my stand is constantly I would modify the crops are potentially dangerous because of human body a long time use to problem.
In the foreseeable future the modified crops it is the one time beneficial but the many times it is negative unfortunately for. It is preudent to dangerous.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, in addition, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 41.0 7.0 586% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.15609756098 412% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 965.302439024 194% => OK
No of words: 409.0 196.424390244 208% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58679706601 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 3.73543355544 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62319957024 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 106.607317073 175% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457212713936 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.9 283.868780488 222% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.582309516 43.030603864 317% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.545454545 112.824112599 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.1818181818 22.9334400587 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 1.69756097561 1296% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224702384221 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811110950244 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668777509533 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122289487183 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580405374072 0.0819641961636 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.2329268293 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 40.7170731707 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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