Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.
Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent decades, pollution by rubbish has been receiving a great deal of media attention due to its substantial impact on human life. Although, consumerism created more convenient conditions for development of society, its adverse effects have posed an enormous number of problems regarding to environmental sustainability.
There are abundantly different explanations to illuminate the cause of producing of waste. Firstly, the ever-increasing demand for goods has been promting higher consumption in households, companies, touristic sites, and so on. As a result, consumers will dump all kind of materials coming with products after using. Namely, candy packages, car scraps, bottles of beer,...Secondly, there is a dramatic growth of industrial areas in developing countries which are supplying a wealth of products for not only their owns but also developed economies. Because of their cheap labours and a myriad of natural resources, the manufacturing process are getting more and more quickly. Thereby, the amount of rubbish will increase day by day if governments does not have particularly relevant policies to cease this situation.
The problem need to change in governmental level out of its complicated including stakeholders and consumer perspectives. On the one hand, policies maker should regulate the law to claim private sector cuts down polluted products and uses more eco-friendly substances. For example, bussinesses could be levied high taxes if their products are below standard set up for environmental-friendly materials. Besides, leader should reconsider developing economy targets to propagate people sustainable lifestyle. Minimalism is a trending choise of many youth to reduce litter and to limit consumption in which people only make their ends meet.
In conclusion, high demand and the development of emerging countries are crucial cause for producing rubbish. Consequently, government could use forced or incentive policies to regulate this problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...dy packages, car scraps, bottles of beer,...Secondly, there is a dramatic growth o...
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Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
...ackages, car scraps, bottles of beer,...Secondly, there is a dramatic growth of industri...
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Line 5, column 543, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun youth seems to be countable; consider using: 'many youths'.
Suggestion: many youths
...yle. Minimalism is a trending choise of many youth to reduce litter and to limit consumpti...
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Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...orced or incentive policies to regulate this problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80204778157 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31367857545 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675767918089 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6250673113 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0562789915556 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0175555147212 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.016468015667 0.0667982634062 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.033368165261 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183989516775 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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