Nowadays Television has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some it acts like a companion. People differ to decide whether television is good or bad for the future of the child. Television has both advantages and disadvantages.
People differ as to decide whether television is good or bad for the future of a child. Television has both advantages and disadvantages.
Firstly, it is common for a family to have at least one television. This shows the importance of television in our daily life. This is just because television provides a variety of programs and offers valuable content. There are many programs on television which are helpful for individuals with many different professionals like farmers, specialists, agents, doctors, instructors, businessmen, teachers, legal advisors, and officers.
In spite of many advantages, television is not free from disadvantages. It negatively affects the studies of the children who watch TV for prolonged periods. Some television programs are often dull and indecent which creates certain feelings in them which are detrimental to their future. Crime and violence scenes are not suitable for children of young ages. People have become addicted to television, often neglecting the necessary things like meals, sleep, and even work. Television is one of the easiest ways to spend leisure time enjoyable which is totally a waste of time.
In spite of the fact that television has some disadvantages, the utility and importance of television in the modern world cannot be denied. To sum up, it has been demonstrated that the TV programs can be both useful as well as harmful. People should limit their time of watching television because its excessive use is wrong socially, morally, and economically. Children should watch television under parental guidance so that they are not affected by the content.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 296, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... which are helpful for individuals with many different professionals like farmers, specialists...
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Line 4, column 216, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...that the TV programs can be both useful as well as harmful. People should limit their time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, well, as to, at least, as well as, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34765625 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9865395251 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58984375 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.870729267 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5625 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3710113565 0.242375264174 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130113089927 0.0925447433944 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124557876244 0.071462118173 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288321331224 0.151781067708 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181548873442 0.0609392437508 298% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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