write a story about something went wrong recently in your life.
The story began since my biggest teenage nightmare happened: My best friend informed me she fell in love. She went on about their love stories and her boyfriend. It felt such irritated to be a trivial name in the conversations. A notion crossed my mind that I was losing my perfect companion. I became angry and frustrated, as if I had been a kid who had temper tantrums when receiving no attention from parents. Gradually, being stuck in the middle of my precious friendship was an inevitable consequence. My sister persuaded me that people led their own life and if I continued to keep my selfish sentiment, two of us could not be friends anymore. What if the worst-case scenario occurred? Her valuable advice helped me to understand the underlying obstacle. If I had tried to keep my temper, we would have shared to each other. We could have talked candidly to resolve our matter, but I was egotistical. If only I had turned back the hands of time; however, sometimes, too late was just in time. I realized it was high time I made amends for my fault to remedy the situation. A heartfelt apology and communication were the keys to effective problem-solving. And as a result, we have maintained our worthwhile friendship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 831, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...per, we would have shared to each other. We could have talked candidly to resolve...
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Line 1, column 1080, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ds for my fault to remedy the situation. A heartfelt apology and communication we...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 176.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.19318181818 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.32968826345 2.80592935109 226% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.715909090909 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.8452908474 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0540196876778 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0229554543985 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453264836631 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0540196876778 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.33 12.4159519038 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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