Some people believe that free housing should be provided by the government for the under-privileged and people who cant affort to buy a house.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is argued by some people that shelter should be provided by the authorities for people with lower incomes and to those unable to buy a house. This essay partly agrees with this statement and will explain the fact that authorities should provide affordable housing options to disadvantaged people, however, people ought to strive themselves to obtain their own living facilities.
To begin with, governments have a certain responsibility for helping people who do not yield enough money to pay own house. That is to say that they have to provide more paying options to afford a property and release flexible mortgages for people who earn low salaries. As a result, everyone can apply to obtain a house regardless of their annual budget. A prime example of this is the Australian authorities that offer low rates mortgages to their residents whose incomes are lower than 1000 Dollars.
On the other hand, people should not rely solely on the government to receive support and might make surplus efforts in order to afford a house. If people waited to thrive in life without striving to make a proper profit, they would be unable to obtain their own belongings. Therefore, people ought to seek for jobs and increase their workload to receive a suitable wage to be able to buy a property. To illustrate this, recent research from the BBC news demonstrated that 80% of people who work extra hours in Tesco are capable to buy their own house.
To conclude, while I agree that Governments ought to support those less fortunate in order to afford a house, I believe that people are responsible for making their own profit in order to make a living and be able to buy an own property.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, while, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82068965517 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57967911802 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527586206897 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.9012791847 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.090909091 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295305534258 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121791642933 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673040400354 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192818453021 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455716913268 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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