People tend to shop online more often than do it in stores. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development/ trend?
It is sometimes argued that e-shopping is attracting more customers than buying things in stores. While this could be obvious that shopping online may bring some detrimental effects to the economy, I believe that this alteration is a potential development for future life.
From a perspective of buyers, there are several benefits associated with online shopping. Specifically, they no longer queue for a long period of time at the cashier to purchase things, as well as spend time driving to the malls and stores. This is particularly the case for the recent COVID-19 pandemic, which are now blocking residents to go outside. Therefore, staying at home and shopping online is an optimum solution to stay healthy and lessen the pressure of frontline doctors and nurses.
Initially, it is clear to argue that e-shopping will decrease the profit of store owners. However, it turns out to be an opportunity for far-reaching stores to reach more customers and increase sales, not to mention the fact that online sellers, with the help of social media, are far more convenient when launching advertisements. A recent survey conducted by McGill University depicts that 70% of buyers from two big clothing branches come across their products while using Facebook.
Nevertheless, there are also drawbacks when shopping using the Internet, as it may be a chance for sellers purchasing unqualified items and harm the national pricing stability. These could be solved when platform software companies adopt firm policies and raise awareness of their users.
Succinctly, despite the fact that online shopping can be misused for fraud and degradation of well-qualified products, the trend of people buying more things online can be applied for future trading market due to its convenience and flexibility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30526315789 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85380740101 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628070175439 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7636187126 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153930273018 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535531700644 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472016632292 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086169456823 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465666599983 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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