in the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
It is true that people in some industralised countries can live longer than ever before. There are several potential negative consequences of this trend, but steps can definitely be taken to tackle with the problems.
As the population of developed countries grow older, individuals are those who will be influenced most. People will have more diseases when they get older because of the longer life, and this therefor may stop the elderly from productive working. Without healthy physic conditions and enough incomes, it is impossible for senior citizens to live independently without helps from their children or younger relatives. At the same time, society also witnesses an increasing burden of supporting seniors. For example, the size of the older population who are over 65 years old will be increase, followed by rising demands in various areas such as medical treatment and free transportation.
All the problems described above can certainly be solved. Firstly, I believe that people should be courage to foster a habit of saving money for future use. Beside of the superannuation required by the law, everyone can have extra savings, as money in the bank or as properties like houses. Secondly, the government can relocate budges from other areas and spend more money on healthcare, age care and public transportation, so that make the elderly’s life more comfortable. Finally, people should pay more attention to having a healthy lifestyle rather than a sedentary life without adequate exercise.
In conclusion, all countries in the world will continue or is going to face the problems of ageing society unless the government and every member of the society work together to fight against them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27737226277 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83356498454 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64598540146 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0679923021 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.230769231 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222464755999 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706681090674 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481015612749 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123042813582 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421230658207 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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