You live in an apartment building but are having trouble with the behavior of your neighbors. Write a letter to inform the building manager of the situation. In your letter
• explain who you are
• describe the situation concerning your neighbors’ behavior
• suggest how the situation could be dealt with
Dear Sir,
My name is Jot and I am a resident of apartment no. 543, Sridhar Colony, Chandigarh. I am writing this letter to complain about my neighbor’s behavior.
I am a resident of this colony for the last fifteen years but never had any problem but the new neighbor who has shifted one month ago is quite annoying. I use to come home late in the evening around 7 or 8 pm from my office. After office exhausting hours, I need a calm and peaceful environment but this girl has made everything worst.
She has parties till late in the morning and play high volume music which disturbs my sleep. Apart from this, she throws the garbage in front of my door which is unacceptable. After watching all this, I decided to talk to her and went to her, she really ill-mannered and said it’s none of my business and shut the door at my face without listening to me.
I would like to request you that talk to this discourteous teen and also ask her to say sorry to me. She is not mature enough to do all that stuff.
I look forward to your immediate action.
Yours Truly,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hifted one month ago is quite annoying. I use to come home late in the evening ar...
^
Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...fted one month ago is quite annoying. I use to come home late in the evening around...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39603960396 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44904947861 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653465346535 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9527036131 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3076923077 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109736718731 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466844017594 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649363405332 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0648418990854 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049800253702 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.