It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime is a direct influence of the increase in violence in media.
To what extent do you agree with the above statement?
it is quite often argued that adolescent crimes are increasing day by day and these are mainly influenced by the electronic media. Because television or YouTube channels are created violence programs with realistic and broadcasting the same to the public. Here mostly children are effected and committed to do a lot of crimes. I largely agree with the former perpective due to the various reasons that shall be delineated in the following paragraphs. this essay shall outline the supporting points in lieu of the negative impacts on children by media.
To begin with, some portion of the people believe that television is imparts a negative impact on communal. Most of the violence programs are shooted with the real world as it is increasing crime rates in the current generation. mostly, children are trying to copy the same behavior they see on the screen in the home or schools. For example, present days an electronic media presenting crime-related programs and children are applying the same and went prison under the law of Immature crime.
Furthermore, children are very sharp to remember the things and they are mentally going into a weak stage to watch these types of violence programs and it is affecting their studies too. Nowadays, technology has improved a lot and media tried to create programs in 3D to attract the children and they are addicted to those programs.
In conclusion, at the age of 10 to 15, children's maturity levels are not up to the mark to discriminate whether doing is correct or wrong. When they watched this type of violent programs, somewhere they apply and go to prison unknowingly.
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furthermore, so, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03676470588 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73140734287 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1326287721 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.384615385 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181772314033 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631405261224 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646884885902 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10285898248 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778878082388 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.