Reducing global environmental damage should be handled by governments rather than individuals. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and provide relevant examples from your own experience.
Most people believes that global environmental damage should be controlled by government in my opinion not only government but individuals should also take steps for this issue.
I believe in this way due to several reasons which I will explore in following essay.
To begin with global environment damage is due to pollution from automobiles, waste materials all are
should be handled by individuals as well. Using reusable bags instead of disposable paper bags and traveling in public transports rather than using their own automobiles that may lead to increased pollution and traffic at roads. People throw disposable bags bottles in streets while walking, If they do participate in making streets and roads clean. Nobody will face issues related to health and other bad circumstances. For example when I was a seven years old I live with my family in small village where people throw their disposal in street they don’t even bother to see if somebody is crossing, Government had hire people to clean streets. Their worker clean streets, Same routine continues for years and no improvements are there.
Secondly government should also help in reducing global damage by providing garbage tools in each area, by hiring staff to make area clean. They must fine the people whenever they caught somebody to throw garbage in steets.
In conclusion, we should cooperate with government to make our global environment hazard free so we can get benefit for life long. And our coming generation will not be suffer from these problems as we have faced.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom automobiles, waste materials all are should be handled by individuals as well...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 254.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14566929134 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64841264311 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637795275591 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8812773575 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.916666667 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228719243693 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749642349779 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719984226176 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109981618643 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604125766527 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom automobiles, waste materials all are should be handled by individuals as well...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 254.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14566929134 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64841264311 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637795275591 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8812773575 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.916666667 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228719243693 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749642349779 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719984226176 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109981618643 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604125766527 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.