More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern life style cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree?
In the last few decades, health issues are rising exponentially. Numerous people are affected from the health issues which are the result of the modern lifestyle and hard to cure by modern medication. Strata of the populace reiterate that adopting traditional medicine is the way to curb these issues. This essay is in disagreement with the above-said notion.
To begin with, nonetheless, new advancement in technology has led to many health issues which have become the part of life. For instance, heart attacks have become common in people nowadays. The hectic schedule of office has decreased the fun time of the people as there is a race for money and to live better and luxurious life they tend to do extra work for being paid extra. Additionally, the changed eating habits have made the problem worse as the packed foods are easily available and have added unhealthy preservatives that are harmful to health. For instance, the survey done by “The Time” reveals that 67 percent of people believe that their health issues are the consequences of their changed lifestyle.
However, that does not mean that traditional medicine should be recommended instead of modern ones. There are issues like Cancer that cannot be dealt with old medicines because it needs radiotherapy which is the advanced technological way of curbing it. Additionally, lots of heart surgeries are common now a day which are impossible with the traditional medication. In short, if the problems are created because of a new lifestyle it can be handled with new modern medicine and technology only because old medicines are not efficient enough to remove the disease from the root, however, this possible by modern medicine.
To conclude, the modern living style has invited new issues which were uncommon in earlier times but it does not mean that they cannot be dealt with modern medicine and there is no need to opt for old and traditional medicines.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nonetheless, for instance, in short, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68549343697 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521875 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9241234861 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.428571429 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317484657894 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105551331849 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716344179882 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197889713542 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515613888135 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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