Write a letter to a friend who is coming over to your country to work for 6months.
Suggestion of city
Suggestion of jobs
Options to make friends with locals
Dear Noah,
Hope you’re doing well and busy packing your bags to come over here!
It seems like you’re having tough time deciding on which city to move in. It’s a difficult choice, I know, but if I were you, I’d settle in a metropolitan city, which offers a variety of comforts like to lead a peaceful life. And one such city is Dallas, which is traffic and pollution free. Also, you have got some nice entertainment option such as country clubs, parks and many man-made lakes!
As for what kind of job to take, knowing you and your love for farming and agriculture, I’d say there are plenty of employment opportunities in this city as most of the university pass out for going after sedentary jobs.
Adding to it, you’ll find here people who are extremely polite, helpful and friendly. You won’t believe that local councils in the city actually conduct events to get to know people around you! Is’nt it so interesting? I know you’re always keen on meeting new people around the world and here it is another opportunity on the way!!
Well, can’t wait to meet you soon!
Best wishes,
Ramya
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| 2020-05-15 | Shraddanand | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which offers a variety of comforts like to lead a peaceful life. And one such ci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, well, as for, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41786034588 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707692307692 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.1002979947 44.8134815571 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.714285714 76.5299724578 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 16.8248392259 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 4.34317383033 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109466101017 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475875883346 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436688497649 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627923738399 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440362520203 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 8.37731958763 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.