The countries arranged international sports event with many benifical purpose. However, The nation had face to face social proplems from sport events.
Nowadays, the world is becoming the flat so the people always have opportunity to respresent their demand, and one of the needs that is connected with other people, knowledge about other countries. Thus, Annual year, the countries arranged international sports event with many benifical purpose. However, The nation had face to face social proplems from sport events.
First of all, international sports events brought many profit to hosting nation. On top of that sports event will attractive a lot of foreign tourist coming to hosting, follow that many other industry of that country developing together, For example: Food product, transport service, accommodation service…As the result, income of inhabitant will growth up and enrich our economy. In addition, international sports event were idealy chanels to promote country’s reputations. In that events, the hosting will chance to show sides of their culture, the their cuisine, spirit of their people. The hosting will occasion to introduce with other people about peace, the humanitarian, spirit-sports. Beside, the international sport events is essential bridge about political among countries, in praticular having bilatreal cooperate about education, technology, culture, economy …which signing among countries in or after sport events.
By contrast, hosting international sport events put many to issue a challenge with hosting nation. Firstly, it is environmental issue. Many people who come from countries with other culture they can lack of conscious in littering or garbage processing due to environmental of life can be pollution. Furthermore, many vehicles to service for events can release C02 in the air that leading to air pollution. Besides, the government of hosting international sport events can hard control with problems hence, it is several offences related. The terrorist gang can operate and threatening with people.
To sum up, exchanges sport is good action among countries. It can create positive affective to the world. However, the nation need requirement to sufficient prepared for that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun profit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many profits'.
Suggestion: many profits
...ll, international sports events brought many profit to hosting nation. On top of that sport...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...ransport service, accommodation service…As the result, income of inhabitant will g...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...our economy. In addition, international sports event were idealy chanels to promote co...
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Line 2, column 547, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
... chance to show sides of their culture, the their cuisine, spirit of their people. The ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, for example, in addition, first of all, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65495207668 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92531052022 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575079872204 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 67.841431858 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444564924667 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14280728148 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143138346451 0.0667982634062 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263819573677 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14223080843 0.056905535591 250% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.