Some people argue that experience is the best teacher. Life experience can teach more effectively than books or formal school education. How far do you agree with this idea?
Experience plays an important role in the wellbeing of an individual as well as society. The issue of whether the experience is the best teacher or not has sparked a heated debate. While some argue that, I think that life experience can teach more effectively than books or formal school education. In this essay, I will put forward my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
To begin with, life experience plays a vital role & individuals learn a lot from life experiences than books. To cite an example, according to a recent survey done by Stanford University, 85% of the people benefited from real-life experiences, whereas 15% of people faced a disadvantage due to it. They improved their existing scenario tremendously and that paved the way for a better economic future.
Those who assert that books or formal school education more effectively than life experience comes forward with the traditional way of thinking. They suggest that students learn a lot in books and formal school education and training. To illustrate, they showcased the recent article in ‘The Times of India’ newspaper which published that there are around 10% of the people who successfully did profit from formal education. But this illustration does not give full support to their argument.
To conclude, while there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, I suggest that that Life experience can teach more effectively than books or formal school education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, whereas, while, i think, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1244813278 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79040686397 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564315352697 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0192197499 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.916666667 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443686262064 0.242375264174 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157951241953 0.0925447433944 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144436293788 0.071462118173 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280649830045 0.151781067708 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772193989239 0.0609392437508 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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